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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Common Too I ring a bell of common shell Through common air we breath as well. Drink a toast of common water To our common change transporter We share a common world you see Whatever was or comes to be. We walk upon a common earth Experienced a common birth. And we all eat of common rice Although there is no common price But hand and hand we are the same With equal and a common blame. If this is so why do we fight? Each has a day each has a night. There is no sense to what we do We all should have a common view. If common be our common bail There is no reason we should fail. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Nice try me Stinkylove, but we all know there is nothing common about you and that you eat wise rice  Oh yeah..and that you are uncommonly COOL  and no one could ever call your couplet common either!! Just let them try..they have to go thru this common moth. LOL    *winkieiwinkie* |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
If only... then peace would prevail.. Nicely done, Sweet Sy... [This message has been edited by Nan (05-15-2002 07:56 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Wisdom is a mind in bail Weighed upon a common scale. And all the votes are not in yet. LOL Love Ya Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky. Nan You are a love. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy this is utterly utterly indescribable in is concept of peace and harmony. Uncanny how you write the thought that was winging around my head today. You are uncommonly good at that. When peace with its love of hope does flow Over hearts and souls that need it so Then words that fell from Seymour’s pen Give peaceful harmony a time of when To gather all that’s good and true We the people will turn to you Use your pen to write the touch of light Guide us all through the dread of night Show us the way that peace can be Direct us all in ways of truth’s harmony Absolutely excellent writing as always. You know this is a keeper don’t you. it’s utterly utterly perfect, and I love it. Your vision will one day come to pass, I know it I. Well, it may be wishful thinking but I hope we will eventually have a time o peace.    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Your delight of write Has sent my wit Soaring into the night. And now on a star I sit Blinded by the light. You have knit a web So charming dear I feel a neb in ebb At least it so appears. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I agree whole heartedly too late will it be when all shall see? Loved this! ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tiersdin My humble thanks. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
This is poem is commonly great, as your poems so commonly are..... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
There is no sense to what we do We all should have a common view. If common be our common bail There is no reason we should fail. I say we open the biggest T-shirt factory and get the governments to foot the bill, and make sure every living soul gets a T-shirt with these wonderful lines of peace...oh I wish Sy, I wish! Nicely done. |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Simple enough that we would do but individuality is the clue for each man who speak of his own thought for by God, 'tis all he's got Excellent write, Sy, thank you for leaving some inspire in the morning... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Much enjoyed your thoughts here. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, And toe has pulled me a plum. Thank you friend. Sharon, Amen, you are the greatest. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Soleil Noir Like it was said, "I have a dream." Martie, Thank you dear, |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
SY~ WISE words....much truth....  Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lauren, Thank you dear, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yanno... I've always tried to avoid being common. *G* But after reading this, it's become my aspiration. *S* This is superb, Seymour. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, You are a rose in my garden and how you bloomed there I'll never know. But I am ever thankfull. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Seymour, I believe deep down we all are the same, only our dreams are unique and that is what makes each of us original, though we all have a heart and we all have our reasons! (smiles) Such wisdom packs your words, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Noah. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sy, IF only.... Much wisdom within this poem.... Makes one wonder, doesn't it? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, Yes it does my friend. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Your work is UNcommonly good |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper, You are uncommonly kind. |
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