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inspiredpoetwriter
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0 posted 2002-05-14 06:19 PM


UNTITLED??? 5-13-02

In the sky I look and see
A shooting star coming right at me
When it lands on the ground
It starts to form to the
Man of my dreams.

He stands handsome and just my
Hight his smile loving and cute
Tonight will dance the night away
In peace forever be together.

I put my arms around his neck
His heat starts a fire in my heart
Slowly we dance as one only his for
Just one night.

By Angz

gimmie a name for dis 1 too!

¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥

© Copyright 2002 Care - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-14 06:55 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo lovely, sweet friend, I think "Star Kiss" or "Moonlight Lullaby" would be a pretty name for this gorgeous romantic poem! (kiss on cheek) May true loves happiness always hu to your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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