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inspiredpoetwriter
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0 posted 2002-05-14 06:19 PM



UNTITLED??? 5-12-03


When will the tears stop falling?
When pain stop hurting?
When will the cuts stop cutting?
When will the voices stop screaming?
When is the rain going to give me peace?
When is the sun going to warm my hear?
When is the time going to give me rest?

All I want is time to slow...

When will the dreams stop tortering?
When will the ghosts stop haunting?
When will the darkness go away?
Wheen is the secret goin to be free?
When is the love going to come to me?
When is the wind going to blow me away?

All I want is my star to glow...


When will the hands stop touching?
When will the ugly stop getting uglier?
When will the thunder stop booming?
When is the smile goin to make me whole?
When is the laughter goin to make me laugh?
When is the truth going to be told?

All I want is to be alone...

When will the water stop drownding?
When will the monsters stop scaring
When will the fire stop burning?
When will the feelings stop showing?
When is the sky goin to turn a rainbow color?
When is the ocean going to shatter like glass?
When is the writer goin to write her hands raw?

All I want is a promise & smile...

When will the grife stop ripping a hole?
When will the sorrow leave me alone?
When will the story of my life stop?
When will the music of my world slow to a
Lovly tune?
When is the reason of been here going to
Make sence?
When I start to fit the pieces of my body
Together?
WHen will the journey take away my rebel heart?


All I want is a friend & a hand to hold...

BY ANG


gimmie a name for dis poem plz.....

  

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1 posted 2002-05-14 06:51 PM




(big hugggsssssss) I can feel such sadness and frustration flowing from your pen, sweet friedn, my heart goes out to you and I know soon your skies will shine with rainbows and doves will fill the pond of your heart and true joy will sing to you! (sigh) I think a good title for this would be "Is That So Much To Ask?" We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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