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Aimster
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0 posted 2002-05-14 02:20 PM


Together

I once thought I knew everything there was to know about true love
Seems to me I didn't know a thing till you were sent to me from up above
Love was something I only dreamt of, now I hold it in my hand
Somehow by an Angels mercy, you made me understand

Looking into your eyes, I feel myself drifting lost but not alone
Inside your heart, I know I have a home
People may talk, let them, they don't know what it's like between you and me
Your love unlocked the chains around my heart, finally setting me free

You've taught me the meaning of what real love is
My heart is wrapped up in the magic of your kiss
Everyday we're together, I realise your my soulmate
That this love between us is destined by Fate

Now I know what love is, I feel it when we touch
Amazes me time and time again though that I could love someone so much
Your eyes lock with mine, as I feel our souls dance
I realise that you and I have been given a golden chance

When the world turns against us, and you feel like giving in
Remember the love we share, let it burn within
The rain may pour down, but together we are safe from harm
Just find shelter from the storm in my loving arms

We can't deny these feelings, we both know it's true
You love me and with my whole heart I love you
Baby...just go with the love we share...feel it with you soul
Let it wash over you...together we will become whole

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

© Copyright 2002 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Madame Chipmunk
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1 posted 2002-05-14 02:32 PM


A very beautiful love poem, Amy...it really grabbed me.
~sweet hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-05-14 02:55 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile and are filled with such sweet romance! (kiss on cheek) may you and your love forever be together in happiness, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-05-14 03:00 PM


Aimster
Well done this is a keeper.

Marsha
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4 posted 2002-05-15 09:17 AM


Amy darling lil sis of my heart, This is simply stunning writing, utterly utterly stunning. How beautiful the words in this are, the flow is as smooth as silk, the phrasing perfect, and the timing is absolutely spot on. Without a doubt you are the best at capturing a thought in a net of wonder.

I should have known when the sunlight came stroking my face with it’s golden light that this morning was going to hold a special treat, and of course it did.

Do I love this? Yes you know I do

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Cirrus
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5 posted 2002-05-15 05:10 PM


Beautiful Miss Amy
Enchantress
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6 posted 2002-05-15 05:46 PM


Perfectly and beautifully penned Amy.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

bsquirrel
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7 posted 2002-05-15 06:04 PM


She said burn ... together.
-TON

vandana
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8 posted 2002-05-15 06:52 PM


enjoyed
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