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Open Poetry #20

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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2002-05-14 03:22 AM

forever
makes me shiver shine
glimmering
in spotlight wine
warm and thrilled
goosebump chilled
forever
makes me shiver shine

forever
makes a heart go south
chokes
in throat
betray the mouth
i try to speak
instead I weep
forever, gone...
my heart gone south.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2002-05-14 05:20 AM

ms serene

enjoyed this
some special thoughts inside

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-05-14 01:06 PM

, New Orleans style! In other words...

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

3 posted 2002-05-14 01:16 PM

I love the way this reads, Serenity, well done...

*smiles*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

DestinysCharm
Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 90

4 posted 2002-05-14 05:19 PM

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-05-14 05:43 PM

serenity
And there it will warm and come back a storm.
Enjoyed

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2002-05-14 07:20 PM

Karen~

Hugsss hon.....hang in there.....

Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

7 posted 2002-05-14 08:41 PM

Gone south??!! Thought you were were on your way HERE...*sigh*

But we do have a date next April...did I forget to tell you? Well...now you know!!! Caiya will be old enough to participate...and auntie Karen MUST attend!!!

*love your shiver shine in this*

sweet hugs sis...

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

[This message has been edited by devina (05-15-2002 01:26 AM).]

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