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amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
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A State of Disarray

0 posted 2002-05-14 02:19 AM


'Once upon a time' never came for me
It started with the words 'The End'
And the capitulation toward anything
Seems fraught in frustrated attempt.
I cry, and bellow the agony
Of this litany of unrealized hope,
Simply stagnant, upon vultured stance
In wait for some catastrophic release-
But, in stoic passion, it stalls.
To dare believe, a vulnerability...
A farce, so intense in fear
With roots ground so deeply
Fire could not turn them out.
The butterfly, I am, in cacoon
With wings that dried inside.
Oh to have the power to escape
This 'never, never land...'



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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2002-05-14 02:33 AM


'Once upon a time' never came for me

Such a nice introduction to your heartfelt poem....
What never comes is never really gone!

This stung a little but it is so very nicely
written amusemi~

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2 posted 2002-05-14 04:30 PM



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3 posted 2002-05-14 05:04 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Amusemi, my heat goes out to you, always believe in your heart and in your dreams and you will break out of that cocoon and fly like that graceful happy butterfly you are and will become! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amusemi, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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