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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2002-05-13 11:19 PM



Pain

falls from the sky
It can drown the meek
And water the eye

Pain

can cleanse the earth
it can fill the thirst

by little children who wish to play ball

Pain

can mildly be cursed

we need Pain  to survive
without Pain  we would die

wait a minute!!! you say you said Rain
say, why DO we need pain?

© Copyright 2002 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
devina
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since 1999-10-28
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Cali
1 posted 2002-05-14 01:54 AM


You and your little ditties Walt...good to see you!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



DestinysCharm
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since 2000-04-28
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2 posted 2002-05-14 12:06 PM


Walt, This was cute, I think a bit of rain would always be better than a bit of pain, yet of lot of either is a nightmare. Thanks for sharing here with us, I enjoyed.
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