The Tempest (greeneyes challenge)

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Open Poetry #20

The Tempest (greeneyes challenge)

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2002-05-13 10:46 PM

Silhouettes in dark
the storm begins to rage
~the tempest.

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (05-13-2002 10:54 PM).]

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-05-13 11:00 PM

Short, not so sweet, but to the point!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2002-05-13 11:08 PM

~D~

yes!! lovely, haunting, and full of mystery....

Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2002-05-14 06:16 AM

Karilea, sometimes brevity can be great yes? I like to write that style often. Thanks and hugs to you.

Lauren, it is amazing what we can see in the pictures you left, each person sees something new. This pic I had in mind was easy. Thanks for the challenge, got me thinking again. Hugs to you too.

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)

DestinysCharm
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since 2000-04-28

Posts 90

4 posted 2002-05-14 04:20 PM

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-05-14 04:24 PM

Way cool write Donna.
This would be a perfect (ten or less) one also.
Enjoyed.
~Hugs~

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