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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-05-13 06:16 PM


A World
Without
Women

A world without women
would be a lonely place.
Men would long for their beauty.
Men would yearn for their grace.
I suppose that I could live
in a world without women
if I really had to.
But when given the choice
of a woman or not
why would a man
want to.

JamesLee
May13
2002



© Copyright 2002 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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1 posted 2002-05-13 06:34 PM


Hello James

I loved this and it left me with a smile to start my morning.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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2 posted 2002-05-13 06:56 PM


Nice to know we are needed.
I like the poem.

Deb

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3 posted 2002-05-13 07:02 PM


A world without women?
That's not for me!
Who needs all that peace
And tranquility?

No female drivers
To dart in and out
While painting their nails?
I could not do without!

No blood-curdling screams
At the sight of a mouse
Like a banshee on steroids
To resound through the house?

No times of the month
That I better not breathe
Or I'll be dodging bullets
Whenever I leave?

A world without women?
That's a horrible thought!
'Cause women are perfect!!
(That's what I've been taught)


oh-oh..


Magnus
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4 posted 2002-05-13 08:05 PM


JM....what a thought to ponder on for a
minute or two....or maybe an hour or two...
HMmmmmmmm??

And I see you brought the best of Balladeer
out from hiding with this poem....Now we are
all gonna catch it....

Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-05-13 08:10 PM


You know James as well as the rest of the guys out here...
You couldn't go a day without us!!
~Big Hugs~  

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Madame Chipmunk
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6 posted 2002-05-13 08:18 PM


A world without women
that could not be
for if there were no women
there would be no thee

I really did love the poem, James...

~womanly hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

serenity blaze
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7 posted 2002-05-13 09:54 PM


I have lived in a world without women...it was kind of fun for ME...grin...for awhile.
This captured my interest, James.

Muys
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8 posted 2002-05-14 03:22 PM


A world without women,can't be exist.
you need a mother dear.
What's the matter with you?
Muys

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9 posted 2002-05-14 03:40 PM


A world without women? That would be as awful as a woman without world.

Liked the poem.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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10 posted 2002-05-14 11:02 PM




(smiles) Oh James, I couldn't agree with you more, God made little girls to gather flowers and sing and dance and bring laughter and smiles to everyone, and when they gtow, women are here to continue to shine with their loving grace and follow their dreams and spread love to the world evermore! (big hugggssssss) My Joanna is the most loveliest angel in all the world to me, and without her, I would feel so very sad! This is lovely, sweet friend, God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2002-05-15 05:58 AM


Thank you Suetang, Deb, Balladeer, Magnus, Enchantres, Lyra, Serenity, Muys, bsquirel and Noah for the wonderful responses...
Thank God for women because as you have all said we couldn't live without them...and why would a man want to...James

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