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I'm Tired
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I'm Tired |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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I'm so tired of trying You weary me with tears Everyday I feel I'm dying While you flood me with your fears I'm so tired of waiting For you to come around I spend each day anticipating Where we might be bound I'm so tired of sighing While each day gets worse We can't talk, though I am trying While living with this curse I'm so tired of caring When nothing is returned I grow weary of your daring It's time I grew and learned I'm so tired of wanting Everything you need I'm tired of your boast and vaunting Where's my time I plead I'm so tired of you dear A change is what I'll seek When you're done with days of drear Come back, to havoc wreak. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Lynne I could see the disappointment and frustration. How common it is that one person will give their all only to be let down by someone who gives nothing in return. I hope you are well Lynne. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
It's very sad when things get so one-sided. This is quite an expression Keth I hope you're writing your frustrations out because I know that works! Please take care! ethome |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sue and Eric, I am writing an unfinished thought in poetic form, after asking the questions what would happen if... Lynne Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth darling sister of heart and keeper of my dreams promise, you write my soul here, and you know it. Yes it’s exactly like this and it’s time to get off the hamster’s exercise wheel and simply stop running ever faster. Beautifully said, each word is emblazoned on my heart. And I’ll take these words of divine wisdom and hold them within to carry me through this time of waiting. Thank you darling heart this is utterly utterly wonderful. Perfect in flow, rhyme and rhythm too    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Keth, I've been that tired before...you got the feelings across..*s M |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
As was once said...The Buck Stops Here! Seems to me that is just what you have said, very poetically so... Well done Keth... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I'm so tired of sighing While each day gets worse We can't talk, though I am trying While living with this curse It sounds like you need a vacation, Keth... Beautifully written  ~tired hugsLyra |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Keth, And now it seems you know the answer. Well done and with too much feeling or experience I might add. LOL Well it was convincing.  It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 She said burn ... together. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Kethry, I know exactly how you feel. I feel this way alot, too. |
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