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Aimster
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0 posted 2002-05-13 03:24 PM




It's Your Heart

Your smile washes over me in shades of colors bright
Your laughter cascades down around me in heavenly light
Your eyes hold me captive with the softest sigh
But it's your heart that lets me never say good-bye

Your touch ignites me both heart and soul
Your gentleness and warmth keeps me feeling whole
Your beauty leaves me breathless, we both know it's true
But it's your heart that keeps me falling in love with you

Your fingertips play delicately across my skin
Your tears and pain you try to hold within
Your grace never ceases to amaze me time and time again
But it's your heart that reminds me you're my most cherished friend

Your kiss lifts me to skies of white and blue
Your face floats above me, making me miss you
Your memory reminds me that our love is not gone
But it's your heart that will forever play "our song"

You soul met mine on a day long ago
Your mind always in sycn with mine, it just seems to know
Your fingers entwined with me, our hands fit together perfectly
But it's your heart that holds mine both soft and tenderly


"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

© Copyright 2002 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-05-13 04:13 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, I know your love will always love you so much and will be happy to offer his heart to yours forever! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-05-13 04:34 PM


Aww..

She said burn ... together.
-TON

rosepetals25
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3 posted 2002-05-13 05:01 PM


Amy,

    Your poems are always so warm   You are so good at clearly expressing your love.  I love that about your writing. Once again, I like

Hugs to ya chickie,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

ethome
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4 posted 2002-05-13 05:35 PM


This is such an endearing and warm open work!   Well done! Just a delightful read!
Marsha
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5 posted 2002-05-13 05:42 PM


Amy darling lil sis of my heart Oh darling girl this is wonderful the rhythm of this is utterly utterly perfect. Do I love it, you know I do, I think you’re getting better and better I really do. This is utterly wonderful full of your heart’s song and your soul’s sigh, absolutely perfect poetry.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-05-13 06:10 PM


I believe you expressed your feelings well...James
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