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What I Want
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What I Want |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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What I Want I want to be the eternal light Who’s strength and faith Guides your heart home. I want to embrace all of your Fears and sorrows, absorb them So they don’t consume your soul That has already seen way to Much hurt, pain, and tears. I want to give you happiness That you have never seen before I want you to be able to see Yourself through my eyes So you can realize that you Are worth the love, respect, and Equality that I will give you. I want to be where you feel safe, secure, loved and adored. I want to be the first person you Want to share your tears of joy And your tears of pain with. I want to show you the honesty And warmth my heart holds for you. I want to give to you all the Amazing gifts you give to me Everyday that I’m blessed to Hear you whisper I love you. I want to love you until I breathe the last breath that This life allows me. "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Okay, you can do that.  Enjoyed.She said burn ... together. |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
so this makes it my turn to go "awwwwwwwwww" hehehe. i love you right back, honey  -Dave |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Tara~ you just have that way, that makes my jaw drop in complete AWE....stunning words with every image I had in my mind too....HUGSSSSS Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, one kiss of his mouth, one touch of his hand than an eternity without it. [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (05-13-2002 10:50 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Tara...I think Dave's answer says it all... Beautiful poem...IWIHWT! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, and I know with such a golden heart like yours you will give him all you want to just as he will offer you all the joy you desire back! (kiss on cheek) May you get all your heart desires, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!  May love and light alwyas shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I just love this...very honest and straightforward. Very touching  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
rosepetals25 You said it all and very well, enjoyed. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
bsquirrel - Thank you, I think I will  Thanks for reading.Dave -  Lauren - That is such a HUGE compliment coming from you. Thank you very much. Barry - Thank you Noah - I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to read. Nicole - I'm happy you enjoyed, thank you. Seymour - Thank you for coming in and reading. |
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