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Within An Embrace
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Within An Embrace |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Would you mind ~too much~ If I just crawled into your lap- Securing myself against The steady sway of your heartbeat? Would it be alright ~just now~ If I drown My insecurities within the depths of your smile? Would you let me ~for this moment~ hide myself inside your arms within a solitary caress? Would you mind ~just now~ Saving triumph for the dawn And just making love- Within an embrace? *This is a softer one from adult so bear with me* Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I'd forgotten how much I needed this poem. Thank you. She said burn ... together. |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Would I mind...just now...? Not at all..... INclan |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
bearing with you my friend. . .  wonderful. . . I like it. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* Did I mention I love it that you're around? I'm bearing with you on this one with no trouble at all. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
pretty darn mushy kissy huggy licky stuff well ok..if ya wanna enjoyed it babe |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
quote:mushy it may be, but i love this stanza. tres cool tanya. C |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I don't believe that I would mind...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A softer one from adult but still very sensuous! Sometimes a good hug is better than anything else on the face of the earth! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Mike- I know this one hit with you...I thank you for your insight dearest... INclan- being an Indiana girl myself...I thought you'd say so..  John- we have always understood each other..ty Temptress- glad to see you around too lady..has been awhile!!! DS-takin you in... ty sweets Chris- ty for enjoying the mushy side of me... JamesMichael-ty dearest ethome- don't I know it...took me years to perfect it htough.. Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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BrandeeM Junior Member
since 2002-05-01
Posts 45 |
Always KNEW you had it in you to write like this!!!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is sooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, I believe just the thought of hugging someone close you love is the ost beautiful feeling of all and crying happily knowing what it is like to have someone who can understand you close to your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is so lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh WOW!!! Devina dear this is one beautiful write, enjoyed reading very much ============================== Would you mind ~just now~ Saving triumph for the dawn And just making love- Within an embrace? ============================== just devine~ ~HUGS~ Tracie |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
It may be softer, but it still tells very well. Enjoyed! |
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