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Disappearing Tricks
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Disappearing Tricks |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Disappearing Tricks The one time in-between him and him there was Al he treated the times of dark like silk and lady calmed the storm warmed the cool collected the soul after awhile there was some lovemaking calm cool collected nice he knew how to silk the lady a picnic gave us a day in the sun he feel asleep that afternoon during the game I sat by reading quietly firemen need their rest when they can get it when he woke, looked around, he smiled his sleep warm filled the room he thought he should go and he did much, much later after months of quiet he called just to say hi. He said he got scared I was too comfortable to know he wasn’t sure what to do next so he disappeared I did not know what he meant until now you are that comfortable even though you talk of the road just beyond us the one you go alone you are that comfortable with deep hugs that leave fingertip prints behind you are that magic that he was not the one that makes me squirm in anticipation and hunger for the moments the ones that take me to an edge I didn't know I had in my curve when you find the secrets I didn't even know I had stored away you are that comfortable but I won’t leave until you tell me to do so… then it will be my time to be Al [This message has been edited by Soleil Noir (05-13-2002 01:25 PM).] |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Wow... smooth, very smooth... Loved it! ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Eloquent. I love the sleep warm. She said burn ... together. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I like where this has come from. . . it's one of those memories that become you. . . you know?? well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
the seams of some when they join but don't join when they just go along together those are seams of comfort enjoyed this noir..way cool |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
And what in the fearsongs call comfortable as anything but turning aside from real lifes living in challenge seeks comfort in being comfort in knowing seeks nothing but extending a Golden touch for not all things are a competition of conquest in striving some simply fit gift of being self An obviously inspring read. Merci Where rainbow touches earth |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you are that comfortable with deep hugs that leave fingertip prints behind loved these thoughts *s M |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the ones that take me to an edge I didn't know I had in my curve =============================== damn....IWIHW that line  When your own emptiness is all thats getting through |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dang! This is SO good! ~Wow Hugs~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
he knew how to silk the lady I love how you say this, Soleil.... Verrrry excellent, indeed!  ~lots of hugsLyra |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Tier, your smooth makes it be so...thank you... BSQ - so did they... Sven, moments become you very well... DS, too cool? Hope not... Eternity - if this was inspired by you inspired by me...merci Maureen, glad you were comfortable in the read... JM, you probably did...your friendship shows through the responses...so you probably did... Enchantress, a GOOD comment! Thank you... Madame Munk...thank you! |
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