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Chapter One, The End

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Corinne
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25 posted 05-14-2002 03:50 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Excellently penned, Michael.

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26 posted 05-15-2002 10:46 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

This is awesome, Michael. *S* I read it earlier in the week... and though I didn't have time to respond then, I couldn't resist coming back... even though adequate words are as scarce now as they were then. *S*

I love the way you've woven your history and the world's... There are some historical events that make me immediately recall where I was and what I was doing... but for the most part, I've remembered a lot of history and forgotten a lot of me. *S*

Wonderful use of internal rhyme... a real treat to read!
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27 posted 05-15-2002 05:08 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Interesting...amazing writing...James
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(big huggsssssss) Oh Michael, this is sooooo very sad and heartfelt, sweet friend, my heart cries out to your fathers loss and the sorrow you feel, but seriously, you have accomplished so very much and you will amount to so much as the daily sequels you write continue to fill these pages with your trials and endeavors and destiny! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Susan Caldwell
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29 posted 04-28-2004 10:40 AM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

Someone brought you up today and I realized I hadn't really read you..

There are really no words to express the way your words touch me..

This piece in particular...

You are so amazing..

I am humbled.

and..I am going to continue reading...

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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