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Once upon a midnight fair...for Serenity
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Once upon a midnight fair...for Serenity |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Once upon a midnight fair young Goddess ventured into this passionate poetic lair. She found her true Soulmate waiting in here, where an adventure in rhyme danced in three quarter time, and began a love affair meant to last for all time. Two hearts beat as one, embraced Divine Love underneath Moon and Sun. Whereupon the Gods on high with great jealousy did sigh, “No mere mortal shall possess such heavenly bliss! These two shall suffer for that passionate kiss!” So she was spirited away before dawn the next day. Now the mortal man shall forever stand holding broken heart in hand. For there are no more Goddesses left in this land. So let this be a lesson to you, be very careful whom you embrace in here. Remember this tale in mortal fear, remember what poetic passions can do! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kacy darling girl this is utterly utterly wonderful. This is another example of how amazing your writing is. You know I love it don’t you? Fabulous writing darling heart. Your use of line, and form is exquisite and I utterly utterly love this. I am awed by the perfect flow and line in this utter delight, I love it and it’s utterly utterly fabulous   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun Wonderful she will love it. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yikes...have I been embracing someone without my knowledge again? Oh...heh heh,  the again was a bit o slip!Not quite sure if this warning was for ME...but? anyhow I enjoyed the poem... (serenity exits, pondering how to break through the glass...)  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Marsha, your replies are utterly delightful. Big hugs to you, sweet friend!  Dear *sigh* thanks for visiting this dream fantasy. Serenity, LOL, I haven't been watching to see who hugs whom.  Glad you enjoyed the poem. The warning is for all mortals, so, if mortal ye be, then 'tis for thee. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
The bell tolls so loud, I've gone deaf!  Enjoyed as always.She said burn ... together. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
No more Goddesses in this land? Better go back out hunting. I love this one. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like these 'Goddess' poems lately. This is very good. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Goddess she is and goddess she be you and me and Serenity! Great poem, Kacy  ~Goddess hugsLyra |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sir Squirrel, glad you could chuckle and enjoy this one. Miss Temptress, sorrry, I forgot about you! You are surely a Goddess. Oh, De Vine one, thank you! I like this Goddess idea too. We are all Goddesses, aren't we? Lyra, so good to have all the Goddesses reply. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh..and hey? I do love it...in fact, I may feel a poem coming on! Thanks m'friend, for thinking of me! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Serenity, this whole Goddess thing could set the board aflame! LOL, the Passions Goddesses rule! (All other Goddesses drool.)  G'nite. |
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