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Memories of Michelle...long gone

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JamesMichael
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Memories of Michelle
~long gone~

She was hard to figure out.
How she'd come on strong like some hot molten lava
and then cool down and give me the chills
like taking a walk in a freakin' ice box.
Something about Michelle that stumps me still.
Me thinks I could best describe her as a
peaceful walk in the park after dark
while enjoying the shimmering stars and
the magic of the moon.
And yet it seems this peacefull walk would end
for us way too soon.
And I would be dealt some tragedy such as robbed
of my hope or my dignity and find her long gone
and me all alone with only some faded stars
and the clouded moon and memories of Michelle
that it seems to me ended way too soon.

JamesLee
May13
2002



[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (05-13-2002 08:27 AM).]

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(big hugggssssssssss) Oh James, this is so very sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I understand how you ust feel and I know deep down there will always be a place for your Michelle and in her heart a place for you, where the stars can never dim! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, this is sadly wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!'



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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ethome
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The old ice box syndrome eh?  Ah but you get the point across well James!
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JamesMichael~
This is really touching~

'she'd come on strong like some hot molten lava
and then cool down and give me the chills'


Creatively original, my friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Me and Michelle are pretty good friends now...I enjoy spending time with her occasionally...james
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JamesMichael~
*smiles*
Still like that phrase~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~
 
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