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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Desire Desire sweeps across the page To seek another stage Humiliation sheds a tear And bows once more to fear Imaginations audience Frowns, sits an acid fence And tears from out our eyes spill vent Till all our shame is spent. We close the curtain as we can Each stage on which we plan And hid within the shadows there The goblins of despair There is no turnabout this life Storage bins fill with strife. They echo as we move along Eternal is the song. And children’s children light our way To see into forever’s day. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
oh yes, this one sings to me... enjoyed... ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You tied this with a bow.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
All the world, indeed a stage...and ya wouldn't know it from the blue pages, but I've got the worst case of stagefright!  Your metaphor sweetens my coffee SO nicely, Sy!  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Kewl Kouplet..."And children's children light our way/to see forever's day"... Indeed...  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
BRAVO!!! dear Seymour this is a brilliant and most delightful write, well done ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwww, this is such a gorgeous blessing for the children, sweet friend, may they always carry on close to their dreams and bring great hope to the future ahead and pass on new love to replace the tears! (big hugggssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
We close the curtain as we can Each stage on which we plan And hid within the shadows there The goblins of despair There is no turnabout this life Storage bins fill with strife. They echo as we move along Eternal is the song. And children's children light our way To see into forever's day. ================================= And tears from out our eyes spill vent Till all our shame is spent. and those will be my cool-pic lines for the day  this is a heavy metaphor me Stinkylove.... I would be interested to know where this inspire came from....mind if I pick your poetic mind? If not....we can pick raspberries instead  When your own emptiness is all thats getting through |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy what can I say except this is utterly utterly wonderful. I love that closing couplet, well, of course you know I love it all but that closing couplet is utterly utterly incredible. Like wisdom from the lips of Athena herself this is truly speaking comment. As always to bathe in the wonder as delivered by the pen of the master of morning starts my day. I think that if my soul isn’t ignited by that special Seymour spark then it slumbers through the day, and never really gets going. Wonderful writing   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tiersdin, Is the song called desire? Sunshine, And a big for you.Serenity, Sweetening coffee sounds good. Nan, Love ya, Tracie66, Well done and hugs are good. Thank you Noah, JM, Raspberries sounds good, I got some whipped cream here. Love ya WWRSMarsha, Glad this ignited a spark. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
SY~ Very lovely words....you pen your images nicely.....hugsss... Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lauren, Thank you for the read and lovely reply. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Humiliation sheds a tear And bows once more to fear Unfortunately, I know those lines by heart! *S* I like this very much, Seymour... you just turn out one excellent poem after another. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, And you my love bumped my Desire to the top. |
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