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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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my muse is playing my mind.... Try one of these......be creative... /pip/Forum7/HTML/000447.html ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Where rainbows wait for rain beyond shadows heart aches No moons rise searching the void above blackness through the midnights-- collecting of your soul Pushing deeper to the edge of your self finding, crying, letting go, left by love Bitter, sweetly echoing emptiness shading the pain of silhouetted circles towering reality taller then your reach No one ever knew, wondered of hidden desires penetrating corners, hollow spaces, loneliness relentless silence Blindly feeling past darkness what eyes can not see; strewn laughter--weeping become a comfort fading unveiled-- like stars against nightfall I would rather have one breath of his hair, one kiss of his mouth, one touch of his hand than an eternity without it. [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (05-13-2002 12:23 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Breathtakingly beautiful Lauren. Hope you had a good Mother's Day!  ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
this is really beautiful stuff, lauren. -Dave |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Lauren, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile and light the stars with inspiration! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Such gentle loving memories you are holding onto, that inspire these poetic words to flow with such love. Hugs to you. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is so...well, WICCAN...a truly beautiful and very astute description of the dark of moon days....the witch in me dances, as the poet applauds! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Where rainbows wait for rain beyond shadows heart aches No moons rise searching the void above blackness through the midnights-- collecting of your soul ======================== No one ever knew, wondered of hidden desires penetrating corners, hollow spaces, loneliness relentless silence ========================= unveiled-- like stars against nightfall ========================= love the cryptic, dark egde to this...and the imagery is hauntingly beautiful... love your new sig too.  When your own emptiness is all thats getting through |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
the imagery in your words leave me breathless, almost. Beautiful, as always |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lauren darling girl excellent writing I love this it’s so well formed the image speaking and alive, very well done. This haunting drifting atmosphere you’ve written and expertly expressed is wonderful. Beautiful writing absolutely beautiful, you know I love this utterly utterly it is truly exceptional   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"No one ever knew, wondered of hidden desires penetrating corners, hollow spaces, loneliness relentless silence" Beautiful and haunting words, Lauren. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hmmmmmm. . . I like this key that you're working in Lauren. . . please continue. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Lauren, Nothing to say but beautiful Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ooo... Aaah... Such pretty colors in yr darkness. She said burn ... together. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, =============== Where rainbows wait for rain beyond shadows heart aches =============== I think I have been there before. You pen it so very well... Like the signature line too. lc |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A challenging write Lauren....You have set a high mark for those that dare go where no poet has gone before!!! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This will be fun, Lauren... In the shadow of the clouds the land is dark except for the bright where the veil is parted allowing the light to shine it's love for the earth thanks for the challenge, Lauren  ~poetic hugsLyra |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I don't know if I'm up to the challenge, but you sure excel at it! Great job hon, and hey I loved that part of the movie City of Angels too!! That movie should come with the kleenex warning also. Hugs. Like a red brick, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Blindly feeling past darkness what eyes can not see; strewn It is there where our thoughts are left on there own, to spend in the night, spreading thin in our day dreams.... You do know how to captivate the reader and set a mood. Lovely work Lauren~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
luv you guys, thanks for the replies...appreciate you all....MUCH Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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