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TriXter
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The One

0 posted 2002-05-12 11:14 PM



The one you cry over,
gotta be her smile,
gotta be her laugh,
gotta be her tears,
gots to be everything.

The one who makes you smile,
she makes you happy,
she drowns youre sorrow with her laugh,
she can drag a laugh out of you no matter how down you are,
gots to be everything

gotta be the one you dont deserve,
gotta be the one you never had,
gotta be the one you belive would make you happy,
gotta be the one you love to hate,
gots be everything

She makes you smile,
she makes you laugh,
she makes you sad,
she makes you cry,
and youre crazy for her

gotta be the one you never had,
gotta be the one you want so darn bad,
gotta be the one that makes you sad,
gotta be the one that still makes you glad,
gots be youre everything.

The man of few words...

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1 posted 2002-05-12 11:20 PM




(sigh) Oh Trixter, your poem has touched a part of my heart someone rarely ever touches, I can relate to this thought so very well for right now I am going through this phase; I love my dream girl Joanna so very much yet she lives so far away from em and I dream of going the distance to seeing her but I still am trying to find out how I can ever do that so I am experiencing the sorrow right now! (big hugggsssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-05-13 12:43 PM


Hi TriXter,

i am curious about this line "gotta be the one you love to hate"..but why would i hate her in the first place? do you mind sharing your thoughts on this line?

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3 posted 2002-05-13 03:22 PM


You made me smile, anyway.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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