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Pitch Black Illuminated |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
From ebony to smoke In the last that we spoke Of a warm wind like this Forever we kiss From ebony to blue In the last that we knew Of a single way home Low sultry moan From ebony on light In the last moment right Of a love throughout time Distant sweet chime From ebony to black In the last wish we lack Of a long lasting hold Sweet story gold Copyright Kkh 5/12/02 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Powerfully passionate... in the sweet shortness of sensuality.... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
From ebony to black In the last wish we lack This was filled with a delightful sense of mystery and magic. Nice poem Diamond one~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwww, I love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always glimmer with such love and romance! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Captivating burst of words, much enjoyed, ThisDiamond! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Excellent style and emotion in this, I love it! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
From ebony to black In the last wish we lack Of a long lasting hold Sweet story gold'' Very lovely.... hugssss Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I thought the repetition of "From ebony to" very effective in representing something the same in the midst of change. The four stanzas can stand separately, and yet together they make a rather symbolic impact, of four seasons representing the stages of life. Deceptively simple, but there's so much depth beneath this still water poetry. I liked very, very much! |
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