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The Lost One |
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kellinjar Junior Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 40New Brunswick, Canada |
Once was there, but now is vanished my feelings that were, are now banished in exile they live, a tortured existence bound and lonely, questing for transcendence though not to be reached, lost their way in the void, floating in a giant bay of nothingness, for what does remain when you are not here, emptiness and pain my heart does rend, split in twain by the loss of you, no longer sane torment for my soul, like a rack upon my being blinded and lost, forever I shall be in suffering |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
kellinjar ... is that like The Killing Jar, which is a completely awesome Siouxsie and the Banshees song? Well, even if it's not, I liked yr post and hope y' post more. Welcome. She said burn ... together. |
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kellinjar Junior Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 40New Brunswick, Canada |
Actually never heard of the band, its a name I created about.. 8 or 9 years ago to use in a novel that never really got where I wanted it to get  |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Siouxsie was this totally awesome punk/goth band in the '80s. Very influential in certain circles. But enough blabbin' -- I definitely enjoyed yr post. She said burn ... together. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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kellinjar Junior Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 40New Brunswick, Canada |
I'm glad you liked my poem bsquirrel. And thank you for the card sunshine, just how did you go about doing that? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kellinjar, when you enter a poem, you will see on the right hand side of the topic a printer, an envelope, and a symbol for E-cards. Click on the multicolored leaf and you will have a whole new side of Passions in front of you. Enjoy! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KellInJar~ Welcome to Passions family of poets and friends~ Hope to see more from you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Kellinjar, i was about to comment how your poems all seem to be one-word titles but i guess i'm wrong..  anyway, feelings banished? interesting thought..i immediately thought of Siberia in Russia and how since i sometimes supress my emotions, my feelings must go really wild and would create chaos, having no regard for the owner~me not in the direction that your poem is leading me..but hey, that was before i read the rest of your poem.. just wanted to welcome you and promise you that i will read your other work...  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A very interesting poem! Enjoyable read! |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
certainly a thought-provoking write, and i like the meter when this is read out loud. very good! i look forward to reading more from you. -Dave |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! Very Well Done First Post! I look forward to seeing more of your work! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
that's a nice first post...keep em comin |
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kellinjar Junior Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 40New Brunswick, Canada |
Thank you all for your words of encouragement I'm glad that you like my work -- |
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