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Shakira New Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 9 |
There is so much we need to discuss Questions need answers, I'm curious The shyness you feel can be resolved Get to know me before getting involved If you want to know me, i'm right here Romantic feelings might be the ones that interfere Taking us to our own little paradise I'm right here if there's room in your life Don't tell me what I'd like to hear Speak from the heart, be sincere I need a prince not a snake I need to be convinced That my heart won't break The issues are laid upon the table Right here is a heart that's stable I'm ready to be more than friends So solely on you it depends |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome! And I love this opening post. "There is so much we need to discuss Questions need answers, I'm curious" Great line! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hi Shakira~ Welcome to passions, great first post. Wonderfully penned poem from the heart, hope to see more from you soon ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Welcome, Shakira. Ah, first posts. I remember mine like it was two years ago. Oh, it was ...... I liked yr poem. Hope ya stay for a while. |
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TriXter Member
since 2002-03-20
Posts 112The One |
"Don't tell me what I'd like to hear Speak from the heart, be sincere I need a prince not a snake I need to be convinced That my heart won't break" Youre words spoke to me, and touched my heart. This is a beautiful poem and i hope to see more like it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~WELCOME TO PASSIONS!~~~~~~~~~ The man of few words... |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This is a wonderful first post, Shakira!!  WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!! Hope to see you around more often!!  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Shakira! Please! Check your E-mail message for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I look forward to reading more from you.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Shakira Welcome and a very cool write, enjoyed. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Welcome to passions, Shakira. Enjoyed this very much. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A very nice first post....and you certainly know how to play your cards....all face up on the table....Welcome to Passions.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 WELCOME TO PASSIONS Very nicely penned first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work ~Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Welcome to Poetry Land ... wonderful cadenced kissed write of honesty to make your entrance with. So nice to meet you. jm When your own emptiness is all thats getting through |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Written with great energy. This is a good site for the people here are special. Good luck your work will be appreciated. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions!! Enjoyed your first post. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Don't tell me what I'd like to hear Speak from the heart, be sincere now that was about one of the best couplets I have read..*s M |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! WOW, SHAKIRA IS MY FAVORITE ARTIST, THIS IS AN AWESOME FIRST POST!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSS) Your piece is filled with such yearning and poetic beauty, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Shakira, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Shakira, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Shakira New Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 9 |
wow, thank you for the warm welcome everyone! I am already a member but I created this alias, you'll just have to keep reading my poems to figure out who I am |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Hi Shakira, while it's nice to tell someone you love him/her, it's hard to put yourself in such a vulnerable situation too..kudos to the personna in this poem for being able to "lay the cards".... i'll play the detective game with you..but you will have to continue posting though..  |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Hi Shakira, This is a great poem of longing. I think I know who you are, but don't wanna hurt anyone if I'm wrong. Can I e mail you my guess? Dawn |
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