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You Are The First Person Who Ever Loved Me
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You Are The First Person Who Ever Loved Me |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan 
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You Are The First Person Who Ever Loved Meby Lyra Nesius...for my Mother with love  You are the first person who ever loved me |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Nice tribute written in your classic style. Happy Mother's Day ~hugs~ to you Lyra~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Happy Mother's Day, Lyra! |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Excellent verse for that special mother of yours. I am glad she taught you the love of the written word. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a beautiful tribute to your mother. HAPPY MOTHERS DAY, LYRA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lyra darling sweet friend how are you? I hope getting a little better every day. This is absolutely beautiful your writing is superb darling heart positively singing with light. Lyra Truly wonderful writing continue to take care of you Warm hugs and healing thoughts xxxx  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
She certainly is, isn't she.... Beautiful! Very! Happy Mother's Day Madame C..... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You are the strong thread running through the colorful tapestry of my life your's was the first stitch in the weaving creating my life from yours ===================================== Lyra this is a wonderful and touching tribute to your mother..heartfelt and written with such lovely phrasing and expression. I love the theme of this.... its so true..."the first person who loved me" that encompasses so many truths. This beautiful poem needs to be in a Mothers Day card on store shelves.  |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
May I say Lira? Yes dear I am the mother of Titia And I love your poem very much. knuffels Muys |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
That is a lovely thought..the first person to every love you..very touching Lyra dear..hugsss ~Victoria |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
You are the music playing softly in the background of the symphony of my life Lyra - this is simply lovely. Happy Mother's Day dear poetess!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lyra A lovely writing of heart for Mother's Day..hope yours is sweet! Hugs! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I cried reading this because it is soooooooo beautiful, I know your mother will always love you so much and you will always be one of the greatest loves of her life! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Lori...thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed this but I wasn't aware that I had a classic style...Happy Mother's Day hugs to you too! James...thank you for liking my poem... Karilea...Happy Mother's Day to you too! D.Lester...thanks so much for that lovely compliment Sue...Happy Mother's Day to you too! Marsha...thanks for the warm hugs and healing thoughts... Barry...Yes she is, thanks for replying Janet Marie...thanks for that TRULY unbelievable compliment. Muys...thanks for replying and for the knuffles...Happy Mother's Day to you Victoria...thanks so much for replying and I hope you had a wonderful Mother's Day Chris...thanks so much...I don't know whether you are a mother or not, but if you are I hope you had a wonderful Mother's Day and if not, I hope you had a wonderful day anyway. Martie...Compliments mean so much coming from such a fine poet as yourself, and I hope you had a wonderful Mother's Day too! Noah...Thanks so much for your wonderful and generous reply ~  ~*thank you hugs to all of you*~ Lyra copyright2002 Lyra Nesius "poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks [This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (05-12-2002 11:18 PM).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lyra~ Very loving, touching write....hugssss Happy Mothers Day.... Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Lauren...I'm glad you enjoyed it... I hope you had a happy Mother's Day. ~lots of hugsLyra |
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