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She touched my leather coat in passing
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She touched my leather coat in passing |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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She touched my leather coat in passing. I saw it in her eyes. She smiled as she trailed her fingers. She said so in reply. I walked forward toward her image. She seemed to grow in size. I pressed my lips to her promise. Drove home under Hollywood skies.
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Like this and the flow of it...Nice write.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! This is wonderful, sweet friend, I know just how you feel, I love visiting my art museum in Denver as much as I can and I feel I am always embraced by the artist and I'm spellbinded with inspiration! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gawd I love the way you write!! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks! The cool thing about this story is the artist was there at the show -- and she kept touching the shoulder of my leather jacket. Nice. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hmmmmm..all artists are that way..touchy feely...*s a nice one... M |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey...this one likes me...and left me smiling! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Enjoyed this one too!!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Nice write here...makes me curious as to whether you went home alone or not!?? *EG Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Glad you all liked the feel of this leather. And devina, I'll leave it to yr imagination -- mainly 'cause the truth is boring. |
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Cirrus Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 55 |
I enjoyed this very much... Is there going to be a part 2? just curious |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is interesting and leaves lots to the imagination...she seems to like leather...James |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Cirrus, If so, it's yet to be written. Here's hopin'! JamesMichael, "The revolution likes leather." -Jim Steinman She said burn ... together. -TON [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (05-13-2002 12:36 PM).] |
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