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Her Name is Soul - An Immortal Tale Continued
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Her Name is Soul - An Immortal Tale Continued |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Immortal child, whose name is Soul She joins in this Immortal game Warrior’s sword becomes her toy Wields it fiercely, without shame At twelve years old, a youngling still She wandered from Immortal camp Lost, alone and bewildered now Soon she grew weary, cold and damp Young Soul sank with the setting sun To rest ‘pon bed of fallen leaves Not knowing that her recklessness Was why her fearful mother grieves. Tis said that mortal men still hunt Women of the Immortal clans And if young Soul was to be found She’d likely die by some man’s hands The darkened night murmured her name A chant to keep her safe from harms When Sister Sun rose in the east Young Soul was cradled in her arms The Immortal they all called Young Soul N’er returned to Immortal clan Tis said she dances with moon’s light Safe from the sins of mortal man |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
PoetD.... Perfection this is! Love the flow, and truly enjoyed the story within this poem. Where was I for the others???? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Beautiful!!... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Awesome! May I ask you to put the links to the series of them each time (picky aren't I), but that way they all stay together and not one will get misssed. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all....I will repost the whole series but a couple of them are in Adult so I can't link them. And one is in prose...but if I can link them, I will.  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! You always weave together the most wonderful sagas and epics, sweet friend, and may she spread her wings of moonlight to the souls of all sinners and redeem them with penitence and forgiveness! (big hugggsssssss) This is excellent, sweet friedn, you always write so wonderfully, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Yes. Oh yes. She said burn ... together. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Enjoying these so much Sharon! You spin gold with your immortal clan women...APPLAUDING MADLY!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Poet deVine, A grand write and I enjoyed the read. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah yes. . . good. . . I love this series. . . it fits you so well. . . looking forward to it. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
a link would be good - i like the ideas a lot. where can i sign up? i can cross-dress for immortality.  |
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