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Poet deVine
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0 posted 2002-05-10 11:49 PM



Honesty is the policy
whether good better or best
so let me have it from you
come on, get it off your chest

Don't prance around the subject
let me have it on the chin
tell me the truth, I dare you!
your words won't do me in

How can we have this thing?
a relationship made of air
if you won't tell me how it is
won't tell me if you care

So go ahead and mumble
look down and scuff your toes
stop the lies between us
from now on, honest knows!

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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2002-05-11 12:48 PM


I liked the saucy style to this.
I'm seeing myself a little too close up!!!
Sticking my chin out, as if to say, "just try me",   have to love that look!!  

This was great!  YOU go!!!



Saunni
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2 posted 2002-05-11 02:01 AM


Poet deVine, cool write here! You got it all right in this one.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

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3 posted 2002-05-11 06:58 AM


and i see your muse has returned in full force...
blessings to you
-Dave

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4 posted 2002-05-11 08:21 AM


This is so true. I have always believed this. "Honesty Is The Best Policy!" Without honesty, how can there be any trust?
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5 posted 2002-05-11 01:10 PM


Sharon darling girl this is utterly wonderful and so true honesty is the best policy always. But gentle honesty is even better.

I love this it’s ideal

  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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6 posted 2002-05-11 01:13 PM


Sharon...

Break out the cannon and let it fire!

Touchee!!

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7 posted 2002-05-11 09:35 PM




BRAVO!!! This is wonderful, sweet friend, yes, I believe honesty is the most important trait of all in a relationship, for without trust no bridges or connections can ever be made and one can never feel comfortable at heart! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, may love forever be honest to your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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