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Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

0 posted 2002-05-10 01:53 PM

Death Of Heart

I know you think your souls in night
And that you have no hope of light
I hear the sound of soul’s soft scream
As you struggle in nightmare’s dream
But don’t you know this hurts me too
As I fight to find my way back through
I can’t bear to see the death of heart
As this depression rips you apart

I know you feel the dark draws near
And I can taste the salt of fear
When I see the look inside your eyes
I witness soul’s heart wrenching sighs
But do you wonder what I can see
I’m watching the loss of you and me
I can’t take the hurt of hearts goodbye
Or watching love’s light slowly die

I know you say that you feel dead
Can’t fight this loss inside your head
But I can taste the remains of bliss
Still lingering in your beloved kiss
Tell me that I’m not touching pain
As I softly stroke your heart again
I don’t want you packing me away
With all your joy of hope and play

Marsha

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2002-05-10 02:03 PM

always written with such heart
hoping your smile returns in your words

hugsssssss
M

Elan
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 382
State of Wide Eye

2 posted 2002-05-10 02:32 PM

How can one not listen to such a plea...

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

3 posted 2002-05-10 02:41 PM

Marsha, this is sooo sad!!!! It is so well written, and descriptive.. It brings tears to my eyes.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-05-10 03:00 PM

Ghostly sad.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-05-10 03:20 PM

Written with such longing Marsha.
Beautifully penned piece.
Enjoyed this much.
~Hugs~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2002-05-10 04:21 PM

No one does...James

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-05-10 04:23 PM

Your words well convey the feelings of your
desire to help, to comfort and make things
OK.... Very well done Mushy...

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

8 posted 2002-05-10 04:34 PM

Yanno sweetie....I had a poem about a broken heart once, somethin' like: You know you just sorta, stomped on my aorta, think I should find it and write it....ya think?...this is good sweets, yanno, from your pic you look kinda like a fox...do ya fool around

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-05-10 04:50 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Marsha, this is soooooo powerfully heartwrenching, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope he can realize the way you feel and feel the way you feel and find peace in you and together you can kiss away each others pain! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!