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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2002-05-10 05:43 AM


Moonlight pale,
Just a sliver of silver,
O’re dark sail,
Little light
To make travel unravel
In the night.
Starlight weak
Covered by cloud’s thick dark shroud,
Light won’t peek
At so white
Cream colored skin I move in
Out of sight
In a lighter shade of pale.

Gloom
Thanks Mysteria for the song
that inspired



© Copyright 2002 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-05-10 06:03 AM


smiling....that is a favorite...and how don't care if it brands me "old hippy"--in fact? I'm damned proud. BEAUTIFUL.
Saunni
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2 posted 2002-05-10 07:43 AM


Professor Gloom,just beautiful! BTW, awesome title!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2002-05-10 12:33 PM


nicely done, of special meaning to me, this tune has been...

M

Elan
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State of Wide Eye
4 posted 2002-05-10 02:36 PM



Thank Goodness Mysteria gets around, I would not have missed this for anything...

Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-05-10 03:30 PM


Love this Gloom.
Wonderful.....simply wonderful.
~hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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6 posted 2002-05-10 05:19 PM




(smiles) Say, what is the title of the song that inspired this, I just love this wonderful dazzling canvas you painted and now I am curious in hearing the lovely song that inspired it too! (big hugggsssss) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

EternitysHorizon
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Twilight's Orchestra
7 posted 2002-05-11 03:05 AM


I wondered upon reading the title if Mr. Brooker and his cohorts named "Procol Harum" might be in some way involved in inspiration herein. Twould seem from your remarks tis so. And I agree there are infinite shades of pale.
"You skip the light fandago..."
Much enjoyment at seeing such.

EH

tracie66
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8 posted 2002-05-11 03:12 AM


Wonderful poem, I enjoyed very much
~HUGS~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



sigheyes
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9 posted 2002-05-11 10:40 AM


good memory, good song.  Nicely written Gloom.
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