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of handkerchiefs (and men I've had...)
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of handkerchiefs (and men I've had...) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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wind... a blue and silver swirl wind to change in pounce of twirl a skirt of crying reckless now within a spin of universe... Stars electric sparking mad a blue and silver world gone bad-- a float of love's incompetence of handkerchiefs and men I've had... A ritual remains the same make it sacred the profrane. Let it whip around again and spark a flame of perverse grin... Let horizon mark the point. Perspective-- be two eyes in joint. To gaze the path and plot my hedge... handkerchief's embroidered edge, a joy of stitch in hoop of you. Joyous stitch in joyous loop... the rounds and sounds. the ways of you... and all that I have never had... [This message has been edited by serenity (05-10-2002 11:12 AM).] |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Gather me, A handkerchief or momentary hankering And let me wipe the tears The memories The sadness of thought you’re thinking, Whirl me, A tattered cloth to accent your dancing, Release me when you’re done And I’ll drift With pleasant touches from the romancing. Gloom |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Serenity, breath taking here! What a write! I don't know what to say!  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
'Tis true - Experience and perspective are integrally bound... A grand write, m'friend.. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
dang..you got hankies? I just got scars..finger nails bite marks.. even my scars have scars.. does that mean I was naughty? enjoyed the write babe |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, A crafty web of true and blue. Laced within the true of you. Great write. Sy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A ritual remains the same make it sacred the profrane. Let it whip around again and spark a flame of perverse grin... Let horizon mark the point. Perspective-- be two eyes in joint. To gaze the path and plot my hedge... handkerchief's embroidered edge, a joy of stitch in hoop of you. Joyous stitch in joyous loop... the rounds and sounds. the ways of you... and all that I have never had... ======================================== this is one of the coolest metaphors and images I can think of for you to play off of....(like candles) it is so uniquely you... and when wrapped in your rhymes divine...and kissed with your express of longing..its pure sen magic...love this one me twin... Stevie Nicks would love this poem   When your own emptiness is all thats getting through |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Jan? I wish you were a blanket, I could wrap myself in...you, m'friend, are total doses of love....  [This message has been edited by serenity (05-10-2002 09:32 AM).] |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
K~ You truly know how to weave 'em poetess....you are so cool I love your unique metaphors and your amazing ability to rhyme them so smoothly....your rhymes never seem forced. Very cool...*hugs* ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Stars electric sparking mad a blue and silver world gone bad-- Now THIS is freakin poetry me sis... love the whole image you bring to a hanky no less!!! Glad to see you writing again... *will be sending new pics of the baby soon* love ya ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You are Goddess!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Life is what we have and have not...and what we had and what we want...James |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Karen~ Amazing words from you.... Lauren~ I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Wow, you truly are the queen of rhyme, sweet friend, may your eyes always be adjusted in perspective and may the canvas of your heart always be soaked with tears of joy that will always polish your dreams! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, you are amazing, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Stars electric sparking mad a blue and silver world gone bad-- a float of love's incompetence I'll be right back...with Kool-aid! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
serenity - excellent write, and ones I've never had, h'mmmm.... BC |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Would you believe that I'm speechless right now!? And I usually need a muzzle when it comes to your poetry This is excellent, gawd, I know this well. You use metaphors and raw emotion to perfection. It's a keeper~Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Watch out, after this poem....they might come find you...LOL.... Liked this mucho.... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Spirit write..totally charming pinwheel of thought. Feels like lace.. Sincerely, Reg |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey...this is one of those that was fun to write...and sort of disturbing on a re-read--grin? (blushing at the naked psychology of it) But I'm so glad you all enjoyed tripping through my corridors...thank you, makes me feel a bit better!  |
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