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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars 
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Inside your mind a tangled mess A thorny patch of pain Hurt is taking over you And making you insane. I don't know exactly what it is That's bothering you so But whatever you are feeling I am feeling too, you know. No matter how bad things get No matter what, I care I can put my arm around you And your pain help you to bear. Cry out a single tear And one will fall from my eyes, too I've been in your shoes before So if you want I'll help you through. You need to be able to let go So from pain you can be free I've seen you at your best I know what you can be. I know you've been trying to push me away But you could never make me not care. And though I don't know the cause of your pain I feel it....because I've been there. I am always here for you. Always. ~skyshine 5-8-02 I'm in charge, and I say question authority! |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
I love your signature!!! These are the words of a truly kind and giving soul....they are the ones each of us needs to hear at one time or another in our lives...it is beautiful...  ! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I know deep down that your friend will always be blessed to feel special around you and someday your friend will reflect upon all of this and thank you, sweet friend, this is wonderful! (smiles) we all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a gorgeous compassionate poem! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you!  Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I really like the true friendship that shines from your poem. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nicely portrayed work! |
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