Star of wonder and light (Star Search Challenge)

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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-05-09 10:32 PM

Star of wonder and morning light
Where might thy be upon the night
Wilt thee shine ever bright for me
Wilt thy glow, be of mine, to be.

Star of Eve upon darkest night
Let thee come, burn most bright
Cast thy beam into mine eyes
Star of Eve, doth bring sighs

Star of Love, Star of life
Leave my soul within thy own
Star of Joy and taker of strife
Take mine heart, not be lone.

Let thy brilliance comfort all
Let thy gleam shine till death
Give this man of heart once small
One last chance, one last breath.

Come to me before the morn
Comfort this heart once torn

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-05-09 10:40 PM

"Star of Eve upon darkest night
Let thee come, burn most bright
Cast thy beam into mine eyes
Star of Eve, doth bring sighs"

this is so beautiful!

loved this part....

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-05-09 11:10 PM

(smiles) YAY!!! Wow, I love the classic and celestial feel of this, sweet friend, may you always wish upon that twinkling star, for your dreams are bound to come true forever as long as you believe in them! (big hugggssssss) This is awesome, sweet friend, excellent work on the challenge, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2002-05-09 11:49 PM

This is so lovely...beautifully written barry..hugs

~Victoria

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

4 posted 2002-05-10 12:30 PM

Brilliant! I love this! It makes my want to swoon....okay, enough from me....

Seriously, though, I do believe you have carved out a literary masterpiece in this one!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2002-05-10 02:10 PM

Sparkling****
This is Great! ThisDiamond

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2002-05-10 04:13 PM

ah yes. . . "look to the stars for thine inspiration. . . "

well done Sir. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2002-05-10 05:06 PM

Barry~

Very lovely my friend....*sigh* you write love and romance so nicely....always....

Lauren~

I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings
Could I have been anyone other than me
True poems rest between the words
Give hope a chance to float, it will

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

8 posted 2002-05-10 05:33 PM

It reminds me of "Star of wonder, star of light. Star of beauty, mercy bright..." well, something like that! Anyway, enjoyed.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2002-05-10 07:29 PM

Barry - you romantic you. Lovely write my friend...

BC

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

10 posted 2002-05-11 12:20 PM

Magnus...How often we search for love in the stars, in the Moon. There's just something about them that reflects the ultimate in love. ***Ivy Rose

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

11 posted 2002-05-11 02:42 AM

An extremely romantic write and I do believe you met this challenge more than well.

We should spend less time worrying about when our life is going to end and more on when it's going to start!

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