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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2002-05-09 09:22 PM



I'll feed you loss in trembling kisses
like chocolate tears without their foil.
I'll feed you hope in buttered toast
to help your strength stay up.
I'll feed you love in rainy windows.
Interested in these shadows?
I'll feed you on these spider verses.
These poems of because.

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devina
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1 posted 2002-05-09 09:43 PM


Just because huh??? Sounds a bit like an advertisement me sweet...

enjoyed your take and shake on it...


Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


[This message has been edited by devina (05-09-2002 09:44 PM).]

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2 posted 2002-05-09 10:31 PM


"I'll feed you love in rainy windows. "

these are heart stealing words my dear.....
*SIGH*

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3 posted 2002-05-10 11:51 AM


Thanks, gals/grrls/girls/women/people.
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