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Morcastlin
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0 posted 2002-05-09 07:55 PM


Loving you is no easy thing
Fear and worry always abound
Pray for mercy on my heartstrings
Graceful and clumsy, love astounds.

O, tricky is the love of my heart
Careful and careless so often
Labored and lazy from the start
Frozen feelings melt and soften.

How many times will I give in
How many times will I take back
How many days will my love spin
How many ways will I lose track?

O, what scares my spirit so much
Is it from my lack of control
I dearly fear the loss of your touch
For which I have sold you my soul.

Loving you is no easy thing,
O, tricky is the love of my heart
It pulls so hard on my heartstrings
I fear it will pull me apart.

Love,
Bonnie

"I want to Live! Life is a banquet and most poor bastards are starving to death!" -Auntie Mame

© Copyright 2002 Bonnie B. Hayes - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-09 08:03 PM




(big huggssssssss) Oh Bonnie, I can understand the tears you feel and the confusion, sweet friend, always listen to your heart whatever happens and I know you will find the one who can strum your heartstrings with sincere and pure love! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
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Victoria, Australia
2 posted 2002-05-10 08:59 AM


Dear Bonnie, us poets speak so much of love and grief, all deep feelings of mortals.
Love can create despair, or give the heart life and the eyes a sparkle.
It's great to share.

I enjoyed the read.

Sincerely Rick, tune those there heartstrings.

SmartChick
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3 posted 2002-05-10 09:29 AM


This is very good. I have felt this same way.
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