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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-05-09 07:21 PM





Within your tender warm embrace
In a hammock we now lie
As we search for constellations
Up above in the moonlit sky

Rock me beside the water
As the sun sinks way down low
You're everything to me
I just needed you to know

Reel me into your love nest
I'll be at the mercy of your love
Captured by our emotions
Love lifts us high above

The mood is so exquisite
And our love is so strong
Wrapped inside your loving arms
Is the place where I belong

Let's give in to our passion
Until the sun begins to rise
And as we float on waves of desire
I'll become lost within your eyes

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-09 07:24 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, you are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, just the thought of holding my dream girl in a hammock in the spring sunshine makes me smile too! (kiss on cheek) May you and your love forever sway happily like happy birds in a birdbath, sweet friend, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-05-09 07:32 PM


Need I say how very romantic and delightful
this poem is...or should I just say....

SEEEEEE,  I knew you could!!!

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-05-11 05:37 AM


That hammock is callling me...James
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