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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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today, I'm feeling. . . fragile not like the porcelain doll or the glass vase but, like something that's balanced between here and eternity ----------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (05-09-2002 04:08 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent.... I relate to this well....those days when you just feel sort of in a spot...not sure which way to head...hesitant... Thanx Sven... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Relate much, today...though the balance is wavering. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Sven...James |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! This is wonderful, sweet friend, I too think this kind of feeling can relate on many levels, such as in rites of passage or destiny or just one wants to do on an ordinary day! (sigh) This flows so gracefully down the page, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ooooh! I like this very much! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Whoa...excellent style, you're takin' the sven pen to new heights with this and I'm lovin' it! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
It's just one of them days dearest...  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I like the tipping back and forth of the verse. Good structure and rhythm. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
nice! the world is so huge, with so many possibilities to live out your life....sometimes it just gets intimdating... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Excellent write dear Sven, Enjoyed ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh, John, this is just too awesome! Awesome!! Sauni @~~~>~~ Sauni The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S. [This message has been edited by Saunni (05-10-2002 07:11 AM).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you all so much my friends. . . good to see that you like this. . . and Devina, yes, it has been one of those days. . . but, today is different. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
how different? |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I love this Sven~ it really gives thoughts to ponder.....Well done Sir....hugsss Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Hello Sven! Good to read your poetry again. I really like the simplicity of this peice... lovely! ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Soft and thoughtful..just like you. I love it. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
faterider, very different. . . thank you my friend. . . Lauren, thank you. . . glad that I could make you think. . . Tier, good to see you again my friend. . . thank you!! Temptress, well. . . um. . .  . . . thank you. . . glad that you liked it. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (05-13-2002 03:04 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That is a tightrope many of us have walked... Excellent, Sven.... |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
tightrope made of razors man stands made of glass; twists turns falls; or does he? wind sways against motion refuting the logic of death with life. -Dave |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, yes. . . I've walked it a lot. . . just hope that the shoes will hold. . . thank you. . . Dave, thank you for the words. . . always appreciated. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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