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Hollywood Ending |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Hollywood Ending What was she thinking with those horse apple eyes Sure, He had the say-it-all-smile the fluttery lashes he musta been beaten on the schoolyard for an I was hoping they'd get back together fom the moment they kissed and she said ''We can't do this" I almost cried- you know I had the right. After all its a Hollywood Ending when sudden time passes where everything's great the two heroes eyes closed relaxing on a bench in a park, on a hollywood set As the little boy with the bruises he'll never get chases his red haired sister the one who will grow up heavy set and look nothing like her mom What a happy life as the credits roll I sleep sound and all's quiet on the set |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Walt, Roll the credits... I give credit to you for your talent and for the way you string words together on a pearlescent stand and for the make you make the picture flow and for your great direction All in all this piece is a credit to you. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Too true, too true... please, a little more you? |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Walt - this is good!!! I am putting it in my library. Well done bud!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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