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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-05-09 06:26 AM



He stole
from me more
than my pride when
he reached into that drawer.
I caught him removing
the last of my heart
that held onto
our past.

M

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2002-05-09 06:28 AM


Like this...James
tracie66
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2 posted 2002-05-09 06:35 AM


Dear M~
Maybe it is a good thing, so you can move on
~HUGS~ Tracie

P.S well penned

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



SEA
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3 posted 2002-05-09 10:20 PM


Maureen,
I felt this, it really jerked at my soul.
I know just how this feels

Enchantress
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4 posted 2002-05-09 10:26 PM


...WOW!!...

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2002-05-10 08:47 AM


Thank you JamesM

Tracie, it is  never a good thing to  lose trust in someone but maybe you are right.


SEA, it's not a great feeling is it..
hugss
M

Nancy, thanks *s
M


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6 posted 2002-05-10 09:08 AM


no, it hurts for a lifetime..... I am sorry you are hurting...
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7 posted 2002-05-10 05:23 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Maureen, this is a short but painful poem, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and while it seems this pain may always scar your heart, I hope now you have found true love to alleviate you and let the smiles outnumber the tears! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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