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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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Undeclared How do I stop from loving you? You draw me in wash away the blue Waiting here on wind these dreams revive Lost within your scent once more alive Do I lose myself within this haze Or grasp the spark of love’s harsh blaze Held fast within murmurs tongue Lost passions rise desires set to run Evading reality and running scared Can I live this life And remain undeclared Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eagle I would say no..you just declared yourself in this poem. I could feel your heart beat in every word. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Evading reality and running scared Can I live this life And remain undeclared Yes...but should you? Hey, I'm for anything that involves evading reality! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Eddie Wonderful read, well done  declared I would say...great write~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful morning read Eddie! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Eddie, I hope you've found what you've been looking for, for I know the love of your dreams will always be so happy to declare her love to you happily! (big hugggsssss) This is a beautiful poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eddie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
EagleOne Agree with Martie, good write. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Eddie darling boy this is utterly utterly wonderful. This is another example of how amazing your writing is. You know I love it don’t you? Fabulous writing darling heart. YOU as I’ve mentioned maybe one or twice are an absolutely fabulous writer. The power of these words are outstanding,. Your use of line, and form is exquisite and I utterly utterly love this. I declare you to be fabulous darling boy utterly utterly fabulous   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Declaration Made. Do I hear a second? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Waiting here on wind these dreams revive Lost within your scent once more alive Do I lose myself within this haze Or grasp the spark of love's harsh blaze ============================ You know what the moth is gonna tell ya, right? Go for the burn baby...  Me thinks you just delcared yourself quite well Eddie....and might I add sincerety looks mighty fine on ya. You already know I have the utmost faith that you will make the right choice. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
So beautiful to see an Eagle soar my friend, This delicate mix of sentiment, romance and longing....woven together to create a work of heart...I always told you a poet lived within that heart of yours...or was that a hopeless romantic either way...beauty is what you capture when you put your heart and pen into motion~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Martie ~ Thank you, I appreciate your comments, take care! Duncan ~ That is the question isn’t it? Tracie ~ Thank you, did I mention it’s good to see you around again? Take care! Nancy ~ Always glad to do that for you! Noah ~ Perhaps one day I will, I haven’t entirely given up hope! Thank you. Seymour ~ I thank you Sir! Marsh ~ Well I guess if its been declared I can’t argue about it any more! Thank you dear lady! Elan ~ Glad to have you stop By. Janet ~ Somehow I though you’d say something like that! You know how much I appreciate your thoughts, thank you, and take care!Butterfly ~ My dear friend, I think perhaps there is a little of both! Your kind words do cause me to blush, but it is good to see you dear friend, take care!Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
....why does one want to stop loving another...? *sigh*...love is a painful thing, yes? but to stop loving..would be to stop living.... you do not remain undeclared....you have spoken.. keep loving.. enjoyed..wonderful write eddie.. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Enjoyed, big time. She said burn ... together. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Eagle, I hear a declaration of co-dependence made loud and clear. Fly high and proud. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Evading reality and running scared Can I live this life And remain undeclared ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I think not! Deb |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Undeclared? Boy do I ever know that feeling...this really speaks to my heart my sweet friend |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Once again I thank you for your thoughts, take care! Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller |
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