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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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LifeLines I can't help it, how I feel about you. Sometimes wondering why I can't break away, yet wanting to be even nearer than close. There is no magic to us, we are who we are, two, alone in this world, confined to ourselves but secretly wanting more. I am restless when nighttime comes because I know my mind will be filled with dreams of you and all I can do is see you behind closed eyes, hold you in my thoughts, kiss you in whispers seeking to reach you somehow, hoping you are dreaming for two. I will never regret our shared moments and will never lose hope, but I wonder if I kissed you deep enough to touch you where I can't be forgotten. I wonder if my eyes with their secrets gave enough insight of my emotional ties to you, the tears, the hurt of the past, the smiling whenever you appear. What lies between us is a lifeline stretched taut at the moment, making it hard to balance more than one day at a time. I am patient, knowing the value in "us" and I am rewarded each morning, when my heart feels the presence of your words. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) I suppose only time can answer these concerns, sweet friend, I hope he truly has kissed the depths of your heart and you and him will share a lifetime of joy together forever! (big hugggssssss) This is beautifully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I understand this so very well and you were able to convey these thoughts so much better than I ever could. Just wonderful! Michael |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Noah..and Michael, I hope you are doing well..I am thinking of you and praying that you come through all this with little pain and quick healing. hugs M * I think this poem came across in more than one intended way *s |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
M...one of the hazards of poetry...is interpretation... That is the magic and mystery of poetry... You are a master of the mystery... Thank You.. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
That's me a mystery, Magnus..even I don't know who I am or where I am headed anymore... thanks M |
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