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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-05-08 01:28 PM



T is for....


If I were to post in Adult
I may say I prefer to be
on this of you instead of that
or the crowning glory of me.

I could draw you out in fibers thin
formed by spindles twist
or race around to search for you
the best among the list.

You may dominate or show me up
or upstage me, billing all.
You may surpass and be the best
or blow yours !*%@! when you fall.

The cream of you would rise to it
or cropped, I'd wear you warm.
I am close to being banned
as object, these words form.

I scope to see if you're around
to dance the disk-o-scene
basing all my movements on
one spot for my routine.

So if you think you have it  pegged
this object, I control
with meanings of, in many forms
you may be on a roll...


What am I????

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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1 posted 2002-05-08 01:45 PM


Maureen darling girl this is utterly utterly wonderful as YOU very well know. You are exceptionally talented as a writer and this object could it be a top? I think you’ve taken this challenge and made it your own. Well done darling heart

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Sven
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2 posted 2002-05-09 04:20 PM


ok. . . this needs some more guesses. . .

great work. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2002-05-11 10:57 AM


Thanks  Sven, Thanks Marsha..I must have made it too easy *s

M

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