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Krissy’s Moan a smile in the making my first rhyme
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Krissy’s Moan a smile in the making my first rhyme |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
~ Krissy’s Moan ~ a smile in the making my first rhyme My mum is a troublesome one She’s on PIP’s all of the time I asked when she thought she’d be done She replied darling this computer is mine I want to post my rhyme in Passions I’ve not done it before you see I think rhyme is rather old fashioned That’s old hat to you and to me She’s driving me to distraction Since she started her DM bit I’m missing my own PIP interaction While at the computer she continues to sit I want to talk to my friendly buddies My muckers my mates, my chums But my mum is like the old fuddy duddies And continues to sit on her buns My mum is distressing you see Stuck sitting typing replies And I’m missing my friends’ poetry While her fingers over those keys really flies I taking this brief opportunity To write something quite absurd She’s bound to really scold me And such bad language I’ve never have heard My mum is on the warpath She’s coming after me I haven't heard her famous laugh But why not now that's no mystery I don’t want to cast aspersions To indicate the real case of such I think these are mum’s worst diversions And she’s doing it much yes much too much Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KrissyLove~ You AND Mum have the most wonderful sense of humor in your relationship~ How delightful to read your rhyme~ You KNOW ... it's contagious ! I think it's spread through the fingertips~ Better clean that keyboard when it's time for your shift !  You both delight this lady to no end with your playful banter ... keep it up ! Neat rhyme kiddo~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (giggles in delight) Heeeyyyyyyy, that's right, she only writes all the time and claims to be better than you in competition because she DOMINATES the computer you share! LOL! Well, I'm sure if you took control of her territory, then she would always envy you too and then you'll show her who's boss! LOL! This is sucha hilarious and delightful read, sweet friend, hopefully you and her can even the time up so you both get a good equal share, we all love you so much, this is an excellent rhyme, I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krissy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Krissy, The last time I even mentioned my Mom in a poem (and let her know) she told me to go soak my head. I admit she knew I was about to shampoo my hair, but I can't help but wonder. You should have a care, you really should.  Nan |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Just remember..if it wasn't for your Mum..where would you be..*s you guys are too much..but I enjoy you both and can just imagine being in the same room with the two of you *s hugssss M |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And your problem is what, exactly? |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
This was so cute krissy..you will have to use it when she is sleeping ha..i guess ha..enjoyed reading hon.. ~Victoria |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
LOL well you could get another PC....cute little write here...much humor involved I am sure.... Lauren~ I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Krissy, How do we know you haven't absconded with your mother's password and are posting as her?! Hmmmm...this could be trouble. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nah, Larry. If Marsha were posing as Krissy posing as Marsha, can't you just imagine the colorful mess we would have in here? The paint pots would be spilled ALL over the blue pages, and we would all be SO sticky! |
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Joe Lamando Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 124Massachusetts,USA |
Krissy, That's wonderful, light-hearted and fun. It has made my day. Thanks! Joe Lamando |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krissy, A well done delightful write. And here is a to make up for mum. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I don't know for sure which of you to feel sorry for.....Oh Krissy, you have really utterly utterly gone and utterly done it now.... I think this is cute...and who said rhyme is old fashioned??? Hmmmmmmmph!!!!! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Well Barry, Don't you know that Krissy's genration considers anything we do to be old fashioned... I loved this one Krissy! I think you and your Mum must have a real special relationship, and you are both really talented. ~rhyming hugsLyra |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Hey Krissy, this is Dulci and Jeff. He let me at the helm...oh, my! *LOL* Anyway, as much as we love your mom, we just can't tell you what an awful child you are, we are laughing way to hard, and Jeff says his tummy hurts from laughing! Batman just came out of the closet to see what all the fuss is about, so don't tell your mum, but we just don't have the heart to roast ya over this comical piece...great rhyme! *LOL* PS Jeff says if you hadn't of spent all that money on Princess Di dolls, you would have some left over to buy your own computer. Bummer huh? *cheezin atcha*Hugs |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Krissy, this is too darn cute! Methinks it's time for two computers in that house, eh? Loved your poem!! ~Hugs~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Krissy You may be a moan, but I am a smile. This was adorable! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
LOL! Way to sneak in, Krissy! But mum's right this time....it's HER computer! So be a good little girl and be kind to the elderly....and sneak in whenever you can!!!! |
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