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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2002-05-08 08:35 AM



my winds dream of you
my sky is daydream thought
your vessel of woman there
in the hovering night
is my horizon

feel my dragon ship
ride close your wake
my mast, let it rest to you
as the necks of steeds
when they are meadow mated

give me this day
my portion of your love
and let us crash together
on the rocks of our eden
let us be splinters there

that no god can seperate


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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-05-08 08:38 AM


and yea
be born again
in the tides
of all creation

yea
be born again
despite
the desolation

yea...


be born again?


yea.


Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-05-08 09:02 AM




(smiles) This is soooooo majestic, sweet friend, yes, yes, may you always embrace your love on Eden's shores and forever feel paradise in every heartbeat! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2002-05-08 09:08 AM


sere' thank you ms...born again..nah, just good dying there babe

noah, thank you amigo

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-05-08 09:10 AM


give me this day
my portion of your love
and let us crash together
on the rocks of our eden
let us be splinters there

that no god can seperate
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Dark....love this!
Good morning~Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2002-05-08 09:13 AM


died just fine the first time, didja?

*smirk*

now...how cool is cool...

many grins again, m'friend.

Decaflame
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6 posted 2002-05-08 09:16 AM



Sounds
of reaching
shore

crashes
of cymbals
pale

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2002-05-08 09:26 AM


feel my dragon ship
ride close your wake
my mast, let it rest to you
as the necks of steeds
when they are meadow mated
(damn!!)

give me this day
my portion of your love
and let us crash together
on the rocks of our eden
let us be splinters there

that no god can seperate
========================

Yowzers...this kind of splinter hurts sooooo good diggin this one DS.

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2002-05-08 09:29 AM


enchantress

thank you ms, you make me smile too


sere' spank you very much..I appreciate you


deca, the pale of images, are eros
in musical form, thank you

janet marie, nuzzlies to your neck skin then...thank you babe for your reads

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (05-08-2002 09:42 AM).]

Martie
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9 posted 2002-05-08 11:30 AM


DS

Good Morning...liked this...especially:

"as the necks of steeds
when they are meadow mated"

tossing smile across the valley to you.

Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2002-05-08 11:35 AM


DarkStranger~
As always ... you work the imagery to the max~

'let us crash together
on the rocks of our eden
let us be splinters there'


Oh ... I just LOVE it !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet
11 posted 2002-05-08 12:12 PM



DS~ I love your images and metaphors...and especially your twist of phrase,
"as the necks of steeds
when they are meadow mated"


Lovin' your writing more and more every day..
*hugs*
~Krista


Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

[This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (05-08-2002 12:12 PM).]

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
12 posted 2002-05-08 02:35 PM


ms martie, bless you ms...and thanks for the smile..caught it on the first bounce

marge, bless your touches lady fair, thank you so much

smittykitty, thanks hon, I appreciate your lady eyes touching

rwood
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Tennessee
13 posted 2002-05-08 03:06 PM


When I see your name..I'm never disappointed..this makes me crazy.. Great love stuff and just simply magical in meaning.

Sincerely,
Reg

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
14 posted 2002-05-08 03:19 PM


regina, if you knew how I enjoy crazy
you wouldn't tell me you were..
well maybe..my plane is broke down

thanks babe

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