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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-05-08 06:15 AM

Making No Sense

You've been there before with me
there, where I drift in an out of memories,
shading me from the blinding light
as you walk beside me
in protective care.
Your eyes never bruise as they
stare, reading into me,
lingering just long enough
for me to feel a blush begin.

Tell me please, my eyes beg,
but in the moonlight, the shadows
hide my want.
I blink back my thoughts
reaching out for your hand
to touch my heart and feel,
feel the rhythm that calls to you.
It is there, when I am feeling loneliest
there, that I can bring you to me at will.

I can't write of love's intensity
only of its caresses, as I lose the fear
of its hold on me.
I can't recall exactly each date
to celebrate as every moment's meet
remains special to me.
I can't even write today
of the depth of it all
as I sit here, thinking
how I am in transition, but feel
that I may never rise above it all
and feel the real of you again.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2002-05-08 09:16 AM

This is lovely, Maureen. You speak these thoughts well.
Sandra

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-05-08 09:21 AM

Maureen,
Wonderful writing, enjoyed the read.

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

3 posted 2002-05-08 11:57 AM

Maureen this is one of your loveliest writes, its flow and construction are wonderful and its words are beautiful. I love this The way it flows over the page like a soft sigh

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-05-08 12:07 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Maureen, this is so powerfully heartfelt, sweet friend, I hope soon you can agian feel the joys of love in its completeness and write of all the thoughts you dream of writing, though the words of love you write are always wonderful and intense! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2002-05-10 08:41 AM

Sandra, I think we feel the same in many ways...I enjoy your words and responses.
thank you
M

Seymour, I am pleased you enjoy my words
Thanks
M

Krissy, I live my life as a soft sigh.
Thank you for your time you take to respond to me.
M

Noah, you are really special..and don't forget it ever.
hugss
M

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