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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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0 posted 2002-05-07 10:39 PM


Surging forth from deeply down, the inner sanctum of my soul, to open arms
Fireball of ecstasy, bursting into every contour, wrapped around celestial charms
Here become as one with light and flame in shaping of a single nova flare
Where the last of past is vanquished, I am lighted of the universe to share

Channeled forth from cores of molten rock, as liquid fire baring surface boiled
Nuclear reactions and attractions, in the right of love withstand to rise, unspoiled
Here become the melted hearts and dreams entwined of strands to birth of life
When the final victories are counted in the truth and at the blade of honor's knife

Shine the beacon in the sea, the fulcrum of the future and the founding of this heart
Shimmering beneath the midday rays to half the hours of the mighty stop and start
Here become the vision and the sight of what immortal man was meant to be
While the transformation casts new moments and devotion by this love potentially

Copyright Kkh 5/7/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300
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1 posted 2002-05-07 11:06 PM


ThisDiamond...You are an incredible writer!!!! Everything flows like the ebb and flow of the tides. Your language sings a new song not sung before.  ***Ivy Rose
Dulcinea
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since 2001-07-22
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2 posted 2002-05-07 11:18 PM


I pictured what it might be like to witness the birth of a star in a new galaxy somewhere. One that future lover's may dream or wish on, or some small boy might find his way home by...intriguing.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-05-07 11:19 PM


...This is exquisite!...

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-05-07 11:20 PM




(smiles) Oh Kathleen, this is absolutely breathtaking, sweet friend, your wonderful words always ebb with such delights and suprises! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20
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where the sky and horizon meet
5 posted 2002-05-07 11:23 PM



Kathleen~ Epiphany is my favourite word....I think what I love most about this poem is your choice of words.  I could pour over them all day.  This is definitely a poem I need to steep in for awhile to appreciate it!

*hugs*
~Krista
  

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
6 posted 2002-05-08 09:26 AM


ThisDiamond - stunning...

BC

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