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Dulcinea
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0 posted 2002-05-07 07:48 PM


Full Bloom


In shadowed stillness fingertips danced
On silken curves they twirled and pranced.
Enticing memories soon to be made
From shivered sighs in awe entranced
Passion's loving cares befell this maid.

Beneath thy tender, soothing touch,
Discovering thrills produced of such.
Lingering casually over molded mounds
Hands of fire sear desire in their clutch
Spiraling upward in blissful sounds.

Thy love is a wish abundantly fulfilled,
Sprung from where dreams are spilled.
It grew from the ashes of heartache's despair
A rare lavender orchid so delicately frilled.
Soothing compassion in answered prayer.

For thou art mine to have and to hold
Forever more, my sorrows thee hast consoled
Blossoms in gentle unfurling surrender
Mine fragrance unto thee only, extolled!
In thy loving arms a full bloom so tender.




© Copyright 2002 Dulcinea - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2002-05-07 07:58 PM


Dulcinea

Beautiful with love!

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-05-07 07:59 PM


A nice little flower of loss and lust. Enjoyed.
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-05-07 08:02 PM




(big hugggsssssss) This is soooooo beautifully bittersweet, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always blossom with such depth and sentiments! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, may loves passion always light your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-05-07 08:08 PM


...Exquisite!...

BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2002-05-07 08:10 PM


Ncely done Dulcinea~  
Enjoyed your touching thoughts of love.
It is quite a triumph to rise from the
depths of despair and bloom in the
constant light, knowing that it will
always be there for you.

Gemini
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6 posted 2002-05-07 08:25 PM


A very passionate and tender tribute of love.  Thank you for this write.
Victoria
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7 posted 2002-05-07 08:49 PM


Very Lovely Dulcie..nice to read your sweet words again...hugss...

                 ~Victoria

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8 posted 2002-05-07 08:57 PM


Dulcinea~
This is a lovely bouquet of beautiful thoughts~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Dulcinea
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9 posted 2002-05-07 11:06 PM


Martie, thank you! I am glad you stopped by to enjoy this.

bsquirrel, well, there may have been a bit of lust growing there too, but certainly not a loss. *G* Thanks for giving it a read!

Noah, sometimes you have to taste bitterness before the sweetness of love can be savored…thank you sweet friend for your always so kind comments! ((hug))

Nancy…Thank you! In one word, appreciated!

Blues, rising up sometimes takes a lot of warm sunshine. I am praying that light never fails. Thank you for graciously reading, I value your comments very much! ((hug))

Gemini, thank you for the kind words, and you are very welcome!

Hi Vic! It is nice to be able to put pen to paper once more, thanks GF! Always a pleasure to see your name here! ((hugs))

Thank you Marge! Bouquets of love always give the sweetest fragrance I think ((hugs)) thanks so much!

Madame Chipmunk
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10 posted 2002-05-08 12:50 PM


A flowering of love...
how very beautiful, Dulcinea
~flowery hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Dulcinea
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11 posted 2002-05-08 10:14 AM


Thank you Lyra! I am so glad to see you "scampering" among those spring flowers! ((spring time fresh hugs!))
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12 posted 2002-05-08 11:35 AM


Dulcie hi there, big smile and big hugs, how are you? I’ve missed your writing, how special and beautiful is this. I really do love the spirit that flows in this delightful paint of your thought. The love that lights this jewel is wonderful, give Jeff and Batman a hug from me, and tell Jeff to write some more I love his writing almost as much as I love yours. Take care my sweet friend, and I now have a huge smile on my face.

Excellent writing and thank you for this  

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy



And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

[This message has been edited by Krissy (05-08-2002 06:40 PM).]

Dulcinea
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13 posted 2002-05-08 05:07 PM


Hi Krissy! Thank you to you and Margie girl! I will give out those hugs for you, and I am sure they will be greatly appreciated! So glad I could put a smile on your face today! Thanks again sweet girl! (((hugs)))
amusemi
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14 posted 2002-05-10 12:39 PM


He's a lucky guy!  

I love the cadence and rhythm...superb.

What an enchanting moment.  How've ya been?

Kat

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15 posted 2002-05-13 03:23 PM


Kat...
Sorry for the late reply...we left for Florida Friday morning and just got home! Will write you and tell you all about it. *S* Thanks for the kind comments! *S*

Zinsser
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16 posted 2002-06-18 12:13 PM


beautiful.......
~~ Connie ~~

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