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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-05-07 06:44 PM



You  

you
I would
recognize anywhere
in flowers
or in seed
much more
than a grain
of dust
the manna
on which
a starving
soul feeds
no part
of you
is granite
but wet drops
on potters wheel
you are
part of everything
a breath
in me
so real



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Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-05-07 08:14 PM


no part
of you
is granite
but wet drops
on potters wheel
you are
part of everything
a breath
in me
so real
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Beautiful write as always Helen.
Enjoyed much this evening.
~Hugs~

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2 posted 2002-05-07 08:17 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh Helen, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) Your words are always complete with such love and smiles, sweet friend, this is compelling, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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