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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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A paper circle in the sky. Glowing cold. No sounding tear. The scissors tumbled in the surf. We panned for silver at the shore. Found whole bucketfuls of light and one handle. Salted link. Smoothed by use. A precise snip tucked among the staining clouds. Found a ring, a pale halo. Among the trees, a lantern bone. Limning light of borrowed sun. A paper circle in the sky. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Found whole bucketfuls of light and one handle. Salted link. Enough to make a witch DANCE!  sure enough, y'got my attention. Loved the paper play here! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, S'en. To make you dance was the intention. Glad it worked.  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A paper circle in the sky. Glowing cold. No sounding tear. The scissors tumbled in the surf. Wow !! Yes, yes, I like this one too!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
BS darling boy this is full of light and images that simply flow over my mind, really excellent writing here. Wonderful writing, poetry doesn’t come a lot better than this    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Michael, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I just love the fabulous imagery you always put into your words! (sigh) This is a wonderful piece of art, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Found a ring, a pale halo. Among the trees, a lantern bone. Limning light of borrowed sun. A paper circle in the sky. ================================== only you..could come up with the image and idea of a "lantern bone. how friggen cool it that...waaaay cool |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BSquirrel~ This is so creatively original~ A lovely write ... a delightful read~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Gorgeous moon poem. Sandra |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
I don't believe I will ever view the moon in quite the same way again. In some odd way, it reminded me of an old cartoon I once saw where a huge dog buried the moon in some guys backyard...go figure! Very creative! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Just lovely bsquirrel~ Lauren~ I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Images devine..much enjoyed! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Glad you all liked my moon thoughts. |
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