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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
i'm sailing the hectic sphere melts and i fall reverie than the feeling grips me i'm velocity rapture creeps in as ambience settles in between so close so tangible.. than lost and found the duality of shared dreams quantitive and real raw and abandoned i can't take it morning come quickly |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Sometimes when we try to run from night's mare, we fall right over the edge... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Power and nausea in succinct little phrases, like swallowing a whole bunch of poison pills and liking it! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Manisha, this is so vivid and wonderful, sweet friend, this is indeed intense and shows the cycle between fantasy and reality in a fabulous vortex effect! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Manisha, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
hey man this is meaningful.. i know this feeling you muse of.. maybe we werent really meant to have it all spelled out for us in absolute clarity... if we did, there wouldnt be problems in the world, would there? i say take it one thought at a time.. the sun will rise again God alone is alone. Man is not. |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Hypnotically descriptive. I like its tension. Good write! |
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