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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-05-07 07:43 AM



Do you remember when
all I could do was think of you
and how our morning rise
could expand and ooze out
as words that exposed more
than my nakdthoughts...

Somedays it all
comes back to me in rhyme,
flushing my body with touch words
reaching within
each breath pounding in my ears
as I remember eyes,
eyes that can uncover the bold
that hid behind, sheltered
far too long a time,
in waste.

I am still unraveling,
reliving temptation,
pale skin desires reaching out
to connect once again,
those pleasurable moments
preparing for what is yet to come...


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Rick
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1 posted 2002-05-07 08:22 AM


I remember much, but then so little, most memories are of times I regret, when thoughts of, should have been.
Many times we live on the dream of what could have been, and the happiness that would then have been.
But then life takes over, the dream has passed and only the very special memories remain.

Enjoyed the read.

Sincerely Rick

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2 posted 2002-05-07 08:55 AM




(smiles) And may you always cherish each and every memory that greets you with a smile, sweet friend, this is excellent! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, awlays be prepared, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-05-07 06:23 PM


another lovely one Maureen..love the way you share your feelings with us..hugss
  
                  ~Victoria

Dulcinea
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4 posted 2002-05-07 11:50 PM


Hum...very sexy GF! Nicely done! ~w~
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2002-05-10 08:59 AM


maybe I share too much of me V..thanks  Dulci, sexy?  not so sure about that anymore

and Noah and Rick, thank you both once again for reading and responding.I appreciate you all.
M

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